Subject: Re: First 29 pages of my proposed Script Wed Mar 12, 2014 1:19 pm
You should start sub-dividing the script; things like dialogue for a Weapons Shop should eventually be separate.
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Subject: Re: First 29 pages of my proposed Script Wed Mar 12, 2014 1:40 pm
Also Nave, are you familiar with traditional script formatting? It might help de-clutter some of the branching dialogue choices.
Nave the DM
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Subject: Re: First 29 pages of my proposed Script Wed Mar 12, 2014 3:04 pm
I'm not, to be honest; I'm just writing forward. It is in no way a final product in the making, and can be separated into cleaner sections once complete and other people start adding onto it. That's the plan, anyway.
aceofspudz
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Subject: Re: First 29 pages of my proposed Script Wed Mar 12, 2014 3:51 pm
We'll clearly need a method to standardize the writing of branching dialog.
I'm familiar with script formatting but it's a pain to do that in google docs and it's not exactly made for branching dialog either.
Nave the DM
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Subject: Re: First 29 pages of my proposed Script Wed Mar 12, 2014 5:33 pm
I agree. So far I've been doing this:
1: Your Dialog NPC: Their Response ---1A: Your First Response ---NPC: Reply to 1A ---1B: Your Second Response ---NPC: Reply to 1B ---1C: Your Third Response ---NPC: Reply to 1C ------1C1: Your Response to their Response to 1C ------NPC: Their Response to 1C1 ------1C2: Your Second Response to their Response to 1C ------NPC: Their Response to 1C2
That's how I did it, anyway. It can be changed to a different format.
Subject: First 29 pages of my proposed Script