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PostSubject: Re: aceofspudz prologue proposal   aceofspudz prologue proposal EmptyThu Mar 13, 2014 3:38 am

I like it better than the other one. Mostly because it's more chill, which is what we want for beginning. Nave's one put you write in the action, which doesn't fit the tone of bro quest. There needs to be a bit of build up before things get serious.
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PostSubject: Re: aceofspudz prologue proposal   aceofspudz prologue proposal EmptyFri Mar 14, 2014 12:26 pm

Yeah, it's not bad. I do think that there could be more time to have small-town shenanigans before we send the SD after them, have the baseline for life established before we send the brotag into a low place. otherwise, it works.
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